Sunday, July 24, 2016

The serial comma




The comma queen, Mary Norris, copy editor for the New Yorker newspaper, talks about the serial comma – with a little help from Robert Frost.
http://blog.theliteracysite.com/serial-comma-confirmed/


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Sunday, July 17, 2016

Avoiding timeline glitches



Sometimes an author gets so wrapped up in writing a scene and what happens next, and what happens after that, that they lose all track of time. One hundred pages later the characters sit down to lunch, yet the reader knows it has to be the next day by now. Maybe even the next week.

Then there’s the author writing book two in a series which comments back to an event in book one, only suddenly now it took place at night instead of during the day. Leaving the reader scratching her head in confusion.

When writing about significant events, make a timeline and keep it for potential sequels, flashbacks etc.

Watch how long scenes are. Can they really do all those things in an hour/day/ or whatever. Especially be aware of travel distances. Google maps may say you can get from A to B in two hours but what about traffic holdups, accidents, bad weather or construction?

When writing historicals remember that travel in the past was mostly walking pace even on horseback. A horse can’t gallop all day!

Have fun planning the events in your story. It’s your book and can be whatever you want it to be. But if your heroine is running five miles in a pencil skirt and stiletto heels with the bad guy right behind her, be sure to mention that she’s a former Olympian distance runner. And check how long it really takes to run five miles in heels!

Helen Woodall
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Sunday, July 3, 2016

The importance of using a good editor for everyone, not just writers












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Sunday, June 26, 2016

10 books that shaped the world



Long before there were books people sat around a fire and told stories. In some cultures story-telling is still very popular. Then there were cave paintings, papyrus scrolls and eventually books.

The “most influential top ten” list varies from list to list, but the Literacy Site has published its list of the ten they consider had most influence on today’s western world.

Several of them are easy to guess, others not so much.
Enjoy.

http://blog.theliteracysite.com/cs-lifealtering-books/

Helen Woodall
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Sunday, June 19, 2016

Planning a sequel



There has been a rash of serialized stories being published. The idea is take a “book”, make sure each chapter or “chunk” ends on a good hook, and then sell each chapter, or chunk as a separate mini-book.

This works fine as long as readers are invested in the full “story” and don’t get tired of paying by chapter (which usually costs more than buying the total book would cost) or stop caring about the final resolution of the entire story.

Each book (or mini-book) in a series must advance the story arc of the entire venture. Readers have to want to read more, to get to the final resolution.

A genuine series might have a different main character, or a different hero and heroine in each book, but each stand-alone story will lead the reader closer to the endpoint of the entire story arc. It’s this overall umbrella story that needs to draw in the reader so they stay buying and reading until the final episode.

Within each episode something must have happened. The characters must have grown, developed, learned something, solved some problem. With a regular book simply sliced into pieces, often this doesn’t happen. The “hook” at the end is artificial, placed there for the sole purpose of making sales, rather than advancing the characters’ journey.

If you are planning a series, ensure each volume tells a story, and that readers will want to follow the longer, higher story arc to the rest of the books.

Helen Woodall
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Sunday, June 12, 2016

Acronyms that became words



Some of these are obvious but others are really surprising. A few of them impressed me a lot. I would never have guessed they began life as an acronym.

Visit brain jet and see nine common words you never knew were actually Acronyms/Initialisms.

http://www.brainjet.com/x/tgg/random/1257/9-common-words-you-never-knew-were-actually-acronyms-initialisms/#page=1


Helen Woodall
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Sunday, June 5, 2016

Oops: Just Made a Six-Figure Mistake


Well-known publishers Time Inc. had the clever idea of creating a new site to attract young women. As such companies do, they spent a lot of money and effort selecting and planning the stories they would publish, setting up the website and so on.

Then they spent a six-figure sum buying a full-age advertisement for their new site in the Wall Street Journal.

This is the ad they published. It appears they forgot to hire a copy editor to check it before it went to press.
Oops.



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